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-We ventured to upstate New York to spend Thanksgiving with my sister and her family. Ended up skipping the [Troy Turkey Trot][4] -- it was miserable out, though I wish I'd just gone for it. It was a perfect way to usher in the winter. Sarah Beth & co. were wonderful hosts.
+We ventured to upstate New York to spend Thanksgiving with my sister and her family. Ended up skipping the [Troy Turkey Trot][4] -- it was miserable out, though I wish I'd just gone for it. The trip was a perfect way to welcome the winter -- cozy, snowy. Sarah Beth & co. were wonderful hosts.
 
 [4]: https://troyturkeytrot.com/